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a long overdue poem

afcbliamk

Vital Reserves Team
#1
enjoy writing a bit of poetry and am starting gcse poetry to conclude my english gcse tomorrow. will also look to write a poem about my trip to celtic rangers at the wknd.

a poem for the champions:

championees championees oh le oh le oh le
its so easy its so easy that we won the league before may
administration administration oh le oh le oh le
hector will liquidate rangers and we cannot wait for that day!

ki swirls it in, mulgrew dispatches - and the worldwide tims cannot hold back a grin,
chico's turn to present a chance on a plate- here comes glenda arriving late, GOAL 2-0
cue the huddle and laugh at the killiee defensive muddle,
mr burley lays a horrific claim, 'mulgrew is 1 footed',
in from the left and nestled in the corner on his right,
it sums up mr burley and shows he talks shite,
bagging a brace, mulgrew- but his work was not yet done,
with perfect measure he supplied hooper it was celtic 4- killie none!

half time and the chants ring out 'cmon you bhoys in green'
the trophy is heading to paradise, rangers can cancel their mr sheen,
to give the champions trophy a wee clean.

the 2nd period has begun, jelly and ice cream for the hun,
with panache a sweeping move makes it 5,
before hooper smashes home to whack killie for 6,
not forgetting the 5th had a great contribution from the younster twardikz.

ynwa,just cant get enough and four leaf clover are all played,
this young side were well worthy of the champions accolade,
a 19 point turn around and not being beaten in 26,
to claim it is tainted shows the huns r pricks.

the feeling is excellent, the celtic family is filled with pride,
this one was for you qc what a great man was mr.mcbride,
so to the future we must look,
craig whyte is banned from scotland-the huns employ another crook,
watt, mcgeouch,fraser and twardikz too,
the youth are coming on up through,
so recall this day and for a great job we must thank lenny,
this title is only the first of many.

hail hail and goodnight.
 
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#2
Most enjoyable but for fuck sakes don't write a poem in yer GCSE until you learn to scan. Its easy when you think about it,just count the syllables. But the emmotion shines through.

Now you wont have read or even heard of William Topaz McGonnagle the world reknowned worst poet ever......millions have tried to reproduce his style but its almost impossible,however,you come very close with this stanza :

the 2nd period has begun, jelly and ice cream for the hun,
with panache a sweeping move makes it 5,
before hooper smashes home to whack killie for 6,
not forgetting the 5th had a great contribution from the younster twardikz.

I love it and I'm sure the Bhoys and Ghirls will as well.Ticv will cover you in splutters,but Wishae Baws will try lube. Google McGonnegal and find out what I mean. Good luck with the GCSE's and I might tamper with YOUR poem to see if it stands up,
respect and hail hail,
Jimmy.
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afcbliamk

Vital Reserves Team
#3
i didnt have a structure of rhyming cuplets or anything, i just made it up and on reflection some is good, some is pish haha - like that stanza u pointed out. thankfully the gcse work involves anylising poetry and language techniques rather than writing poetry myself!

please do tamper with it jimmy, i'll try another more planned one soon :)
 
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